# Started on Raging Alone
=> .. Up a Level

As we are now coming to the end of Flight of the Scions[1], it's time to work on the next project. The next one is related to my first series, Raging Alone[2]. After spending a week on it, the first chapters are up for patrons[3].

=> https://fedran.com/flight-of-the-scions/ 1: https://fedran.com/flight-of-the-scions/
=> https://fedran.com/raging-alone/ 2: https://fedran.com/raging-alone/
=> https://fedran.com/patrons/ 3: https://fedran.com/patrons/

Originally started as a serial for my Journals of Fedran[4], Raging was just going to be a world-building piece (off of what technically was another world-building piece). Of course, when I changed the tone for Journals and removed the serials, it was pulled out because it didn't “fit.”

=> https://fedran.com/journals-of-fedran/ 4: https://fedran.com/journals-of-fedran/

The original focus for the story was going to show a different coming of age ritual, a more individual one, compared to the group event from Sand and Blood[5]. This will help establish a precedent for when I get to Kin-Killer[6] and My Sister's Keeper[7].

=> https://fedran.com/sand-and-blood/ 5: https://fedran.com/sand-and-blood/
=> https://fedran.com/kin-killer/ 6: https://fedran.com/kin-killer/
=> https://fedran.com/my-sisters-keeper/ 7: https://fedran.com/my-sisters-keeper/

As I wrote it, I realized that I was also creating a story about toxic masculinity. Desòchu's story was always about his anger and his need to be in control. It was also about Desòchu's and Rutejìmo's father and how Hikòru[8] own self-destruction with the death of his wife ended up being a poison that inflicted Desòchu. This, of course, ties into some of the events in Sand and Blood.

=> https://fedran/com/hikoru/ 8: https://fedran/com/hikoru/

Now, I've written up the first five chapters. They aren't as polished as Flight as I work out the ideas. I'm pretty happy with these first chapters. There is another fifteen that are in various states of written; they'll be edited and fleshed out over the coming weeks. I do have a goal of always maintaining one week per chapter.

I don't think I'm going to post this on Wattpad or Ello though. I know I said that with Flight, but I had already posted a number of chapters and wanted to finish it out.


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