iopus3: improve wording and fix typos, thank you IanJ - tgtimes - The Gopher Times Err bitreich.org 70 hgit clone git://bitreich.org/tgtimes git://enlrupgkhuxnvlhsf6lc3fziv5h2hhfrinws65d7roiv6bfj7d652fid.onion/tgtimes URL:git://bitreich.org/tgtimes git://enlrupgkhuxnvlhsf6lc3fziv5h2hhfrinws65d7roiv6bfj7d652fid.onion/tgtimes bitreich.org 70 1Log /scm/tgtimes/log.gph bitreich.org 70 1Files /scm/tgtimes/files.gph bitreich.org 70 1Refs /scm/tgtimes/refs.gph bitreich.org 70 1Tags /scm/tgtimes/tag bitreich.org 70 1README /scm/tgtimes/file/README.md.gph bitreich.org 70 i--- Err bitreich.org 70 1commit 8f34f1eb9e432557c468ba9aed4f8078d32e30ab /scm/tgtimes/commit/8f34f1eb9e432557c468ba9aed4f8078d32e30ab.gph bitreich.org 70 1parent ad5d34852bb9ced3a2b4fb5f5b8de263f76e0834 /scm/tgtimes/commit/ad5d34852bb9ced3a2b4fb5f5b8de263f76e0834.gph bitreich.org 70 hAuthor: Josuah Demangeon URL:mailto:me@josuah.net bitreich.org 70 iDate: Thu, 27 Jan 2022 21:27:36 +0100 Err bitreich.org 70 i Err bitreich.org 70 iopus3: improve wording and fix typos, thank you IanJ Err bitreich.org 70 i Err bitreich.org 70 iDiffstat: Err bitreich.org 70 i M opus3/article-100rco-uxn.mw | 4 ++-- Err bitreich.org 70 i M opus3/article-bitreich-radio-auto-… | 2 +- Err bitreich.org 70 i M opus3/article-ploum-forever-comput… | 10 +++++----- Err bitreich.org 70 i M opus3/article-tgtimes-100-years-of… | 14 +++++++------- Err bitreich.org 70 i M opus3/article-tiny-creatures.mw | 4 ++-- Err bitreich.org 70 i M opus3/article-unix-calendar-comman… | 4 ++-- Err bitreich.org 70 i Err bitreich.org 70 i6 files changed, 19 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-) Err bitreich.org 70 i--- Err bitreich.org 70 1diff --git a/opus3/article-100rco-uxn.mw b/opus3/article-100rco-uxn.mw /scm/tgtimes/file/opus3/article-100rco-uxn.mw.gph bitreich.org 70 i@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@ Uxn portable assembly language Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i The web is well-known for its drift toward \fIplatform effect\fR: Err bitreich.org 70 i reproducing the features of the underlying operating system from Err bitreich.org 70 i-one of its application, in this case, the web browser. Err bitreich.org 70 i+one of its applications, in this case, the web browser. Err bitreich.org 70 i This is largely made possible through javascript, and the advent Err bitreich.org 70 i of WebAssembly can only contribute more to this. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ platform on things as small as a 32bit microcontroller: Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .QP Err bitreich.org 70 i Currently, there are ports (not all are complete) for GBA, Nintendo Err bitreich.org 70 i-DS, Playdate, DOS, PS Vita, Raspberri Pi Pico, Teletype, ESP32, Err bitreich.org 70 i+DS, Playdate, DOS, PS Vita, Raspberry Pi Pico, Teletype, ESP32, Err bitreich.org 70 i iOS, STM32, STM32, IBM PC, and many more. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .DS Err bitreich.org 70 1diff --git a/opus3/article-bitreich-radio-auto-generated-music.mw b/opus3/article-bitreich-radio-auto-generated-music.mw /scm/tgtimes/file/opus3/article-bitreich-radio-auto-generated-music.mw.gph bitreich.org 70 i@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ The #bitreich-radio title display has been fixed too. Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i I hope, this increases the listening experience. Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i-All recommendations, especially about more auto-generated music, is welcome. We need to escape the copyright mafia trap. Err bitreich.org 70 i+All recommendations, especially about more auto-generated music, are welcome. We need to escape the copyright mafia trap. Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i Sincerely yours, Err bitreich.org 70 i Chief Music Manager (CMM) Err bitreich.org 70 1diff --git a/opus3/article-ploum-forever-computer.mw b/opus3/article-ploum-forever-computer.mw /scm/tgtimes/file/opus3/article-ploum-forever-computer.mw.gph bitreich.org 70 i@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ never sleeps while trying to raise the bar over and over. It plays with Err bitreich.org 70 i the limit of physics to keep the Moore's Law dream going. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i-By Building faster computers, hardware engineers offer more resource to Err bitreich.org 70 i-software makers, allowing to build more ambitious projects. Err bitreich.org 70 i+By Building faster computers, hardware engineers offer more resources to Err bitreich.org 70 i+software makers, allowing them to build more ambitious projects. Err bitreich.org 70 i The computer performance discipline sure have been worked up thoroughly. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i@@ -16,19 +16,19 @@ If the software comsumes all the extra computing power for its own goal, Err bitreich.org 70 i then we are conjointly building very fast snails. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i-This conquest for aa better cost/performance balance is one direction Err bitreich.org 70 i+This conquest for a better cost/performance balance is one direction Err bitreich.org 70 i for evolution of computers, but it as well possible to imagine a Err bitreich.org 70 i race for better reliability and durability instead. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i-Ploum offers a vision of what a computer maximizing durability of Err bitreich.org 70 i+Ploum offers a vision of what computers are like when maximizing durability of Err bitreich.org 70 i the hardware, but also the software ecosystem, so that a computer Err bitreich.org 70 i built today still be useful in 50 years without upgrades (not Err bitreich.org 70 i preventing upgrades to happen). Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i An old knife is still a piece of metal that can be sharpened over Err bitreich.org 70 i-again to be able to cut long after it was built. Can it be the same Err bitreich.org 70 i+again to be able to cut long after it was built. Could this also be true Err bitreich.org 70 i for computers? Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .DS Err bitreich.org 70 1diff --git a/opus3/article-tgtimes-100-years-of-radiodiffusion.mw b/opus3/article-tgtimes-100-years-of-radiodiffusion.mw /scm/tgtimes/file/opus3/article-tgtimes-100-years-of-radiodiffusion.mw.gph bitreich.org 70 i@@ -2,18 +2,18 @@ Err bitreich.org 70 i 100 years of radiodiffusion Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i-Internet existed forever: books and printed press have always been Err bitreich.org 70 i+The Internet existed forever: books and printed press have always been Err bitreich.org 70 i around for communicating ideas and information, and evolved Err bitreich.org 70 i-progressively to become what Internet is today. Err bitreich.org 70 i+progressively to become what the Internet is today. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i Letters were carried by messengers riding horses, postal train, or Err bitreich.org 70 i airplanes. Long-range communication evolved from here slowly for a Err bitreich.org 70 i-lot of time, but accelerated a lot on these recent years. Err bitreich.org 70 i+lot of time, but latency and bandwidth improved a lot these recent years. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i The common pattern: a new discovery in electronics permits a new way Err bitreich.org 70 i-to communicate information on a long-distance, with a lighning-fast Err bitreich.org 70 i+to communicate information on a long-distance, with a lightning-fast Err bitreich.org 70 i adoption all around the world: Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .IP "1919 " Err bitreich.org 70 i@@ -21,13 +21,13 @@ wireless telegraphy and music transmission on Germany, Netherland Err bitreich.org 70 i and United-States Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .IP "1920 " Err bitreich.org 70 i-daily radio programmes in England, United-States and URSSR Err bitreich.org 70 i+daily radio programmes in England, United-States and USSR Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .IP "1921 " Err bitreich.org 70 i-radio broadcasting on Eiffel Tower with a 900W power intensity Err bitreich.org 70 i+radio broadcasting on Eiffel Tower with 900 W power intensity Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .IP "1922 " Err bitreich.org 70 i-foundation of BBC and arrival of 2000W broadcastings Err bitreich.org 70 i+foundation of BBC and arrival of 2000 W broadcastings Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i A few years before, the long-range communication tool was paper. Err bitreich.org 70 1diff --git a/opus3/article-tiny-creatures.mw b/opus3/article-tiny-creatures.mw /scm/tgtimes/file/opus3/article-tiny-creatures.mw.gph bitreich.org 70 i@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@ A world of tiny creatures Err bitreich.org 70 i Ants. Is that what we would look like to the eyes of a giant? What Err bitreich.org 70 i if one of those giants had the curiosity of looking down on our Err bitreich.org 70 i world, watching all our tiny activities, our tiny trades, our tiny Err bitreich.org 70 i-farming, our tiny meals, our tiny families, our tiny lives. Err bitreich.org 70 i+farming, our tiny meals, our tiny families, our tiny lives? Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i E.O. Wilson was one of these giants, looking at the ants: the real Err bitreich.org 70 i@@ -14,6 +14,6 @@ study of insects. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i After 92 years of passionated life, E.O. Wilson is fading away, Err bitreich.org 70 i-joining the soil, which he spent its life observing. Closing its Err bitreich.org 70 i+joining the soil, which he spent its life observing. Closing his Err bitreich.org 70 i own book, while at the same time inviting everyone to open their Err bitreich.org 70 i eyes, and watch, carefully, this world of tiny creatures. Err bitreich.org 70 1diff --git a/opus3/article-unix-calendar-command.mw b/opus3/article-unix-calendar-command.mw /scm/tgtimes/file/opus3/article-unix-calendar-command.mw.gph bitreich.org 70 i@@ -2,9 +2,9 @@ Err bitreich.org 70 i The UNIX calendar(1) command Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i-It is probably there sitting on \fC/usr/bin\fR, the Err bitreich.org 70 i+It is probably there sitting in \fC/usr/bin\fR, the Err bitreich.org 70 i calendar(1) command can offer you a fair dose of flexibility that Err bitreich.org 70 i-lack to web-based or smartphone-based calendars. Err bitreich.org 70 i+lacks in web-based or smartphone-based calendars. Err bitreich.org 70 i . Err bitreich.org 70 i .PP Err bitreich.org 70 i By storing events on a single file of text edited by hand, calendar(1) Err bitreich.org 70 .